A poem I wrote today(2/2/13)..what do you think?

I had been asleep for what seemed a very short time,
My soul had been called Home, to that Son bright clime.
When I heard my name called out loud,
My grave burst opened, and I joined Him in the Cloud.

My body and soul had been reunited as one,
Forever to be with God's only Son.
It was perfect, without one stain of sin,
Going Home, where it did all begin.

In the Cloud were all the Saints of old,
Whom God's Grace had been richly bestowed.
These are they whose robes had been made white,
As the noon day sun, they shined so bright.

As I went through the gate, Who's that I did see?
Why, it was God, on His Throne of Majesty.
The One Who sent His Son to die,
For those who were afar, and those who were nigh.

I thanked Him for the love bestowed to me,
Now I would be with Him for throughout eternity.
Thanking Him for one lost sinner who had been found.
Hearing the rejoicing, oh what a beautiful sound!

Home at last, no more to go astray,
Forever with Him, one eternal day.
If you are lost, you can go, too,
Jesus tasted death, because He loves you.

Written by me,

2/2/2013