An unfinished song. Help me finish it

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  1. Guitar25

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    This is a song that i started writing bu tim having a bit of "Musicians Block" I wondered if any of you out there would have some suggestions. Read it and lemme know. Its called Cant Be Silenced


    I’m put down, I’m shut down
    I’m broken
    Cast aside like I’m nothing at all
    Looked down on, spit upon
    Disregarded
    But I will rise up, never give up
    Use the strength that’s been given to me
    Serve my Lord, my savior
    Savior of my soul

    I, I’m stronger than I was before Never stop living, never stop giving, all I can for my Lord
    I, I cant be silenced anymore
    Never stop telling, never stop yelling, about my Lord
    -Chorus
     
  2. dianetavegia

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    Well I'm not talented that way at all but wondered if it's based on
    Maybe that verse will trigger some thoughts!

    Diane
     
  3. ColoradoFB

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    Here are a couple of verses for your consideration:

    He came down, he came 'round
    Came knockin'
    I asked him to come in
    He answered
    When he rose up, never gave up
    Gave me strength to carry on
    To serve My Lord, my savior
    Savior of my soul

    I was lowly, but slowly
    I'm learnin'
    To be like Him, 'cause I love Him
    My life's turnin'
    From nothing, to child of the King
    Every day, another joy he brings
    I'll Serve my Lord, my savior
    Savior of my soul
     
  4. dianetavegia

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    Colorado! Excellent verses! I like 'em!
    Diane
     
  5. Gina B

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    I’m put down, I’m shut down
    I’m broken
    Cast aside like I’m nothing at all
    Looked down on, spit upon
    Disregarded
    But I will rise up, never give up
    Use the strength that’s been given to me
    Serve my Lord, my savior
    Savior of my soul

    I, I’m stronger than I was before Never stop living, never stop giving, all I can for my Lord
    I, I cant be silenced anymore
    Never stop telling, never stop yelling, about my Lord


    I'm rescued, I'm clean now
    Cast out of my bondage, flying free
    Redeemed now, by his grace
    And satisfied
    So I will praise him, shout his name
    From the mountains to the raging sea
    Sent, I'll go, I'll go now
    Rise up to the call

    I, I’m stronger than I was before Never stop living, never stop giving, all I can for my Lord
    I, I cant be silenced anymore
    Never stop telling, never stop yelling, about my Lord
     

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