I figured I might as well jump in and let you critique one chapter of my upcoming book called "Above the Clouds." I am paralleling my experienced hiking the famed Appalachian Trail solo and doing it southbound with that of kids growing up hiking through life without a father. The book's intended market is to kids of abuse and/or abandonment- no matter what age they are! You can go to this link and read it for yourselves: http://hike.pgmradio.org and hit the "About" button. When you scroll down you will see a link so you can read one particular chapter called "Avery Peak." Let me know what you think will you? Thanks!