Tract I've been working on

The following tract/handout is designed to spark discussion between Pagans/Wiccans and Christians. I'd like to get some feedback on it if I could.

Copyright © 2005 William C. Rogers II. All Rights Reserved.

This tract is based on Paul's message in Acts 17:22-31

 

Most of this is taken from Paul's sermon in Acts 17.

And yes, it is broken down into smaller paragraphs when on paper.
The main reason I didn't use direct quotes from scripture, is that when you give a tract like that to a Pagan or Wiccan, they tend to toss it out as they don't regard the Bible as being authoritative. I'll add onto the tract the references that are relevant to the tract, but I don't plan to do alot of quoting. Primarily because this is designed to spark discussion, rather than be a primary instrument of bringing someone to Christ. God created us, all of us, which is the primary reason for bringing up that we are his offspring, but only in that sense. It's not about spiritual fathership, but the fact that we are created by God. Which is why I said we are all his offspring in a sense. I do plan to create a Christian guide for using this tract.

 

Thank you. I'll look at rewording the section about being the offspring of God and see what I can come up with.

 

A Revised Version:

Are you religious? Have you heard of the Unknown God? Who do you think this God is? Perhaps you have examined various gods and goddess of all religions. Perhaps you don't believe in any god. Let me tell you of the Unknown God. Two thousand years ago, the people of Athens worshipped many gods. So many in fact, that they erected an altar with an inscription that read "To The Unkown God." So who is this God? This is the God that created the world and all the things that are contained on the world. This God does not live on earth. He does not live in any residence created by human hands. As God who created the heavens and the earth, He rules over heaven and earth. Tell me, can a God like this be worshipped merely by the works of men? Does He need us or our works? He made all things, all men, and all languages.
This God has determined the ages that different empires will rule the earth and how much of the earth they would rule. But this God has not left us here alone without a witness of Himself. The earth, the sky, nature itself bears witness to this God. He left us this witness so that if we seek after Him, we could find Him. For God is not far from any of us, but is nearby us all so that if we turn to seek after Him we will find Him. It is in the power of this God that we are able to live and move. This God has created us with the ability to choose to follow Him or not to follow after Him. Over three hundred years before this altar was erected in Athens, a poet named Aratus wrote that we as humans are the offspring of deity. And in a sense, he is right. Deity created us, and therefore, we are his offspring. We are the children of God in that sense. Since we are the children of God by creation, we ought not think that we can create our own deities, or fashion ourselves images of deity that fit our own thoughts and desires of what deity should be. In this time, God has commanded all men everywhere to change their ways and turn to Him as their hope for the future. God has determined that worshipping others is against Him.
God has appointed a day when He will judge all those who have lived on the world of their sin.He will judge by the One whom He hath raised from the dead. For He has given a sacrifice for our sin, that we would not have to bear it. Christ Jesus is the One who has risen from the dead, and it is in Him that we will be judged. So what gives this God the right to command us to turn to Him? Well, as said before, God created the world and all that is within, and we are His children. God created us, and wants us to be in a relationship with Him. Does not the Deity that created the world and us deserve to be worshipped? But beyond that, there is a relationship with God that transcends that of any other deity. When one dies, they are welcomed into everlasting reward, or everlasting punishment. Our everlasting reward is dwelling forever with Deity--God. But everlasting punishment is the destruction of the soul in hell for eternity. God gives you the opportunity to come to Him. This God I've told you about, the one who raised Christ from the dead, commands you to repent and turn from your sin. Won't you do so today?
If you have any questions regarding what you have read here, ask a trusted Christian friend, or visit http://www.exwitch.org
Taken from Acts 17:22-31