This is a song that i started writing bu tim having a bit of "Musicians Block" I wondered if any of you out there would have some suggestions. Read it and lemme know. Its called Cant Be Silenced
I’m put down, I’m shut down
I’m broken
Cast aside like I’m nothing at all
Looked down on, spit upon
Disregarded
But I will rise up, never give up
Use the strength that’s been given to me
Serve my Lord, my savior
Savior of my soul
I, I’m stronger than I was before Never stop living, never stop giving, all I can for my Lord
I, I cant be silenced anymore
Never stop telling, never stop yelling, about my Lord
-Chorus
An unfinished song. Help me finish it
Discussion in '2003 Archive' started by Guitar25, Aug 9, 2003.
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Well I'm not talented that way at all but wondered if it's based on
Diane -
Here are a couple of verses for your consideration:
He came down, he came 'round
Came knockin'
I asked him to come in
He answered
When he rose up, never gave up
Gave me strength to carry on
To serve My Lord, my savior
Savior of my soul
I was lowly, but slowly
I'm learnin'
To be like Him, 'cause I love Him
My life's turnin'
From nothing, to child of the King
Every day, another joy he brings
I'll Serve my Lord, my savior
Savior of my soul -
Colorado! Excellent verses! I like 'em!
Diane -
I’m put down, I’m shut down
I’m broken
Cast aside like I’m nothing at all
Looked down on, spit upon
Disregarded
But I will rise up, never give up
Use the strength that’s been given to me
Serve my Lord, my savior
Savior of my soul
I, I’m stronger than I was before Never stop living, never stop giving, all I can for my Lord
I, I cant be silenced anymore
Never stop telling, never stop yelling, about my Lord
I'm rescued, I'm clean now
Cast out of my bondage, flying free
Redeemed now, by his grace
And satisfied
So I will praise him, shout his name
From the mountains to the raging sea
Sent, I'll go, I'll go now
Rise up to the call
I, I’m stronger than I was before Never stop living, never stop giving, all I can for my Lord
I, I cant be silenced anymore
Never stop telling, never stop yelling, about my Lord