Haiku #02

[Rubato 1]

Great example, thou
Your words flow like water.
Yours--but I must think.
:BangHead:

Thou art my teacher
Yet I cannot but fail thee
So I write like this.
:laugh:

 

[standingfirminChrist]

The student learneth
Graduation day awaits
Haiku champion!

 

[Rubato 1]

Ah, graduation...
Terminate and commencing.
End school--start learning!

 

[standingfirminChrist]

Into a new world
One of which demands much toil
No time for Haiku.

 

[standingfirminChrist]

And yet, I noticed
In post number sixty-three
Six, not seven

More education
In the school of haiku now
Seven, not six

 

[Rubato 1]

Good bye, fare thee well
Auf Wiederzein, So long now.
I'll see you later.

Sixty-three was fixed;
So nothing gets by you, huh?
Doctor Haiku, you.

 

[standingfirminChrist]

The second became
Six instead of seven
How soon we forget.

 

[standingfirminChrist]

Sixty-three better
Now you must attend to make
Sixty-six better.

 

[Rubato 1]

The second became
Six instead of seven
How soon we forget.

Now your second row
Contains the six, not seven.
How you disappoint.

 

[Rubato 1]

Finger-counting wierd
I haven't had much practice
Are there still five here?:laugh:

 

[standingfirminChrist]

As teacher, I say
We both need to go to school
and learn haiku rules.

 

[standingfirminChrist]

Four is correct count
The thumb is an extension
To slow down fast cars.

 

[Rubato 1]

Tuition's not cheap.
Perhaps another member
would stoop to tutor?

 

[Rubato 1]

All this time I thougt
Thumbs could retard just my bike.
Feet work best for cars.

Thumbs don't push pedals
Feet aren't right on handlebars.
Either way, please stop.

 

[standingfirminChrist]

Feet are used inside
But... slow the car from outside
An extended thumb.

 

[Rubato 1]

the haiku numbers:
one, two, three, four, five, six, eight.
(seven is too long)

 

[Rubato 1]

Snow lies white and deep.
Equal underneath it are
Gardens, walks, and roads.

 

[SaggyWoman]

Sometimes it rains fast
Sometimes it snows too lightly
sometimes the sun heats

 

[standingfirminChrist]

On wet rainy days
I amuse myself on web
bashing computer.

 

[Rubato 1]

Rain, rain, go away
Come again another day--
Haiku rhythms here?